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My hand hurts

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hnnng worked on this all day but wow it was kinda worth it since it's been a while I've worked on something that big and my dragons were kinda rusty
commission for :iconverridith: and she better worship me now ok

bye

Verri's oc do not touch or else
I'll eat your toes
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi! Nice work, I really like the coloring and the shiny white light reflexes!

This is my first critique so don't take it wrong.

I think your weak point lies in the sketch phase cause you're finishing touches are spot on.

What I'd suggest is for your next dragon, get a cool movement in the body (get those arms moving, that body twistin') and, while I know that one wing is in the back and the other in front, it's still a little too big (or two small, you choose which wing you like best and get the proportions right).

Finally, the lighting on the dragon's left wing (the big one) looks as if you didn't really know what to do. Observe a little bit and plan the anatomy of the wings before coloring, so that you can go at it with the same "know-how" as you did the rest of the beast. ;D

If you work a little more on that on your next dragon, I'm sure it will look awesome! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>